After my last point was given, the transition from here to my conclusion was clear, signaling that the end was coming near.
The language throughout my speech was very clear for the audience according to the feedback given.
Also, there was another clear transition statement made to join this point with the next point.
My last point being women today in the 21st century in the USA was supported by its visual aid of men and women in an office, with a woman being the boss.
Adderley 1 Jada Adderley Communication 2200 Professor Stephen Decker Informative Speech Critique My informative speech on Women’s Rights was given on February 27th, 2018.
My specific purpose being women’s roles through history was clearly portrayed in my central idea and throughout my speech.However, the body of a critique includes a summary of the work and a detailed evaluation.The purpose of an evaluation is to gauge the usefulness or impact of a work in a particular field.More so, things I need to improve on in my introduction is, make the relation to the audience more precise.I made a statement that relates to today’s society but it was not clear in how that effects people today.This photo showed the evolvement of society as a whole.This point was given with three different effective articles.My speech began with an effective opening, explaining the important roles of women.According to the audience’s reactions in the comments made, my introduction was effective in grabbing their attention and kept them listening through the six minutes.My citations were well presented as I mentioned the author, qualification, source, and date in every article that was placed in my speech.There were also citations provided for my images which were provided on the works cited page.